Yeah Okay....
I did like it, but I wished there was a better vioce actor for Ryoga... he's my fav. character out of the whole bunch.
Everyhing else was good... 'xept when you got lazy! lol!
Yeah if you kept up the work without going half ass, you'd get a good story...
Although I think your animation needs more spiffing up (that's just what I think..)
4/5